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Where He Comes

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He waits until you approach his house. There he quietly walks out like a stalking cheetah. His creeping is quiet and precise, after all he's had lots of practice with his other victims, flooding the basement and filling the sheds. He leashes out like a cobra, and presses you to the floor as he revs up the chainsaw in his left hand. He brings it down and-

I'll leave it to the imagination. You could get away.
Image size
560x562px 201.98 KB
Make
SONY
Model
CYBERSHOT
Shutter Speed
10/1250 second
Aperture
F/3.8
Focal Length
7 mm
ISO Speed
100
Date Taken
Jul 17, 2005, 7:16:46 PM
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Rachastock's avatar
Now see that comment did not give you anything to improve on and was not helpful at all.

Let me show you what real critique is. Firstly.. this is a strange angle to take a photo at. You might have perhaps trampled the bushes a bit or come closer to the window like a stalker. If you leave it in black and white I would increase the contrast because presently there is no focal point to the image. Maybe you could just make the door a different colour if you are wanting that to be the focal point. Try playing with editing a bit here.
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